November 11, 2007
Page 1 Book 1: Betrayal Blues
I started actually making this comic a while back.
I have to say that the flaws in the art are waymore apparent now than they ever were when I was making it…
For example, the slightly light outline of the curved sleeves is because, somehow, the line colour got put to 53 and my screen was largely too dark for me to notice. Then there’s the complete lack of a female body type for Rain, Steph and Lorna (The girl in black in frames 6 and 7). I’d still call it passable though, but certainly not my best ever..