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This may be a long list of things not to do with telekinetics…
This week: Do not tick off a telekinetic.

Discuss this comic

Posted by: Lying

7 Comments »

  1. what did he just do? >.>

    Comment by Kumo — August 9, 2010 @ 1:25 am

  2. @Kumo He appears to have swung the door. Whether this was to block arrows, or show that he could swing that big door is unknown.

    Comment by Chameon — August 9, 2010 @ 1:37 am

  3. The art is making it a little difficult to figure out what’s going on.

    Comment by EP — August 9, 2010 @ 4:01 am

  4. Indeed, I believe you’re taking the “non-traditional panels” a bit too far. I liked it better when most of the comic was in a regular format; it’s a lot easier to follow.

    Plus, it seems the Book 5 comics are shorter than the previous ones (a trend I’ve remarked since the end of Book 3). There are a handful of panels where people talk, and than a big splash panel where Spire does his telekinesis. For this comic, in my opinion, it would have been better if you had shown only one panel of Spire grabbing the door, which would have allowed enough space to show the rest of the action in this comic, rather than the next one. Similar criticism applies to the previous strips.

    Comment by Mad Mask — August 9, 2010 @ 12:49 pm

  5. Lying, sometimes less is more.

    Comment by Danzama — August 9, 2010 @ 11:27 pm

  6. @Mask: the previous were close enough to traditional to easily discern the events. This one, however…

    Comment by Kumo — August 11, 2010 @ 6:34 pm

  7. I didn’t say they weren’t. I just said that they took too much space.

    Comment by Mad Mask — August 11, 2010 @ 7:01 pm

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