November 3, 2014
Page 7 Revolution
The walk home.
I’m really pleased with this page. Probably the only improvement I can think of is to have a few people on the street in frame 5, but given the hour and what I’d have them there to illustrate I think it’s fine to have the street be empty. No-one wants to be around the military’s dogs.
I’m also trying to push the envelope on show-don’t-tell, having pages with less dialogue but just as much implied. Hopefully I’ve achieved that here.