Page 7

Page 7

The walk home.

I’m really pleased with this page. Probably the only improvement I can think of is to have a few people on the street in frame 5, but given the hour and what I’d have them there to illustrate I think it’s fine to have the street be empty. No-one wants to be around the military’s dogs.

I’m also trying to push the envelope on show-don’t-tell, having pages with less dialogue but just as much implied. Hopefully I’ve achieved that here.

Posted by: Lying

2 Comments »

  1. I can neither determine whether the guy in the background is spying on them,afraid of them oe just one of those never happy supervizors

    Comment by Resender — November 6, 2014 @ 12:22 pm

  2. creepy, angry guy in white in the back ground
    i wonder whats with him

    Comment by Sawtooth44 — November 7, 2014 @ 10:12 am

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